[ Sure, charming in that "first-date-ever-and-trying-too-hard" sense, right? Right. But she's still smiling at him, so he can't be doing that bad.
He watches her intently as she takes aim, squaring up with a serious face. To his relatively-untrained eyes, she definitely looks as though she's got what it takes to make it happen, but...
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He watches her intently as she takes aim, squaring up with a serious face. To his relatively-untrained eyes, she definitely looks as though she's got what it takes to make it happen, but...
Nope.
Huh. How weird! Oh well. ]
Try again! You can do it!