[Much better. He doubts he could have balanced on that oar, and even with a fairly strong stomach, he might've been airsick by the time they reached the temple if she'd hung him over the oar like washing on the line.
He watches her go, smiling faintly, and returns the wave before he heads back on foot.]
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He watches her go, smiling faintly, and returns the wave before he heads back on foot.]