[She flinches slightly from the rebuke, but settles easier than earlier. It's a fair answer.
At his sparse approval, she places the arrangement in the vase, carefully fixing the plants. She gets up from her seat and takes a few steps back, studying the arrangement from a distance and different angle.]
It feels like it's missing something.
[But what? She crosses her arms and stares at her arrangement, then looks at the other arrangements being worked on, lips turning into a frown.]
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At his sparse approval, she places the arrangement in the vase, carefully fixing the plants. She gets up from her seat and takes a few steps back, studying the arrangement from a distance and different angle.]
It feels like it's missing something.
[But what? She crosses her arms and stares at her arrangement, then looks at the other arrangements being worked on, lips turning into a frown.]
It's very plain, isn't it.